All Comments on 'Breaking Up and Making Up'

by nikkiesilk

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Amazing

Loved it so far,thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great

What a great story

JessicaAlexanderJessicaAlexanderover 7 years ago
Amazing story!

What an amazing and beautiful story. I loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Heartfelt wonder.

Excellent story, want more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story

I loved the flow and the buildup of the story.

Great job

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

As usual, your standard is high....please keep writing xoxo

AntoinetteBelleAntoinetteBelleover 7 years ago
Beautiful story

Love it. Well done. Was so much fun to dress up to read this. Xxxxx

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wonderful love story. I absolutely loved it

Might be the best TG love story I've read. I do so love the characters. Danni found her real self and Carl found the love of his life, Bravo

angela_tvangela_tvover 7 years ago
very, very, very....

A very good story! I loved every moment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Soo good

An excellent story I absolutely loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Fantasic story

Wish I could give it 6 stars

mumblegooseeggmumblegooseeggover 7 years ago
Thank you

Thank you for a long juicy romantic tale... Gives me patience to wait for more episodes of the Cockatoo.

However, if Carl and Danny and the girls are gooners, shouldn't they be living in Highgate and go to the Duke's Head there, instead of the one in Putney? (I assume it's the one in Putney, since they have a view of the river.)

Also, for Americans, paracetamol is acetaminophen, aka Tylenol. (I'm just showing off my talents at speaking multiple languages here, lol.)

Five stars, as usual. xoxoxox.

Tyri

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
thank you

awesome story and i really enjoyed the read

hoping for part 2

ArgentPenumbraArgentPenumbraover 7 years ago
Bravo! Excellent

IMHO Nikkiesilk is one of the best authors to be found within the pages of Literotica, and this posting provides us with another superb piece of Nikkiesilk's erotic storytelling.

I find that this story and the evolving plot-line are heartwarming and delightfully entertaining.

The main characters have a three dimensional quality to them and they are extremely engaging.

It's very easy to warm to Danny & Carl and become fully invested in them and their story; I hope that they discover their true selves and they each find their soul-mate.

BTW...

Thank God for Siobhan, if only there were more women like Siobhan around, the world would be a much more enlightened place...

I sincerely hope that the author can find the inspiration and the desire to expand the story and provide us with many more episodes of this wonderful story.

P.S.

If you require further evidence regarding the quality of Nikkiesilk's work I would strongly suggest that you check out his Cockatoo series, which is a tour de force of erotic literature; long may it continue...

Regards

Argent

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great work as usual

Hi Nikkie,

As usual, terrific. So enjoy your stories and look forward to any more.

Graham

BarefootClericBarefootClericover 6 years ago
Captivated

I haven't had the time to ever finish writing a story, but i enjoy reading stories here as much as I can. I hardly ever comment, although I should more, and never criticize grammatical oversights. Getting lost in these stories is why I read them. After reading this story I needed to tell you that it touched me deeply. This was one of the most beautiful stories I've read here; a truly amazing TG love story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

KarenCDFLKarenCDFLalmost 6 years ago
A Lovely Story

Your story grabbed me and brought me into their world!

You made it seem so real.

I hope that you might write more about these characters.

Thank you.

silverace1silverace1over 4 years ago
Loved it!

Thanks for the story. All your posts are great and I am enjoying the reads!

Danielle_CD58Danielle_CD58over 4 years ago

I loved it. Is it wrong to say I wished I was in the story??? I hope not.

ShelbyDawn57ShelbyDawn57about 3 years ago

What a wonderful love story, they way you wove the tale, the way Carl and Danni developed as people and their relationship with each other and, of course, the girls, it was all just magic.

I literally could not stop reading.

Thank you so much for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So love this story the way it went from a first meet to friendship dealing with there throats fears to realise how that felt for each other with out showing it and Danny realising whet he like and wonted to coming clean with each other I love every minute of reading it loved to read more thank you

mammoetmammoetover 2 years ago

Loved it, a shame it had to end so soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Lovely, a really sweet and delightful story. I'd have liked a bit more of the sexy detail at the end!

Anonymous
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