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I Can't Make You To Love Me

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by quietpoly05/03/04

nice

It's a nice poem. One suggestion:
You mentioned you can't stand the
rain without him/her. And the last
line says you would rather sit in
the rain. Conflicted feelings about
the rain. Is it on purpose or uninten
tional, as in the rain is better than
her/him? A very sweet poem, nonetheless.

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