All Comments on 'Gryphon'

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shaftmasters_morganshaftmasters_morganalmost 20 years ago
Unlocked Muse

And to think, this time last year you thought you couldnt write stories or poems! Good thing I unlocked your muse huh? Keep up the good work, you are still ahead of me!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
nice

i like the story, i thought it was very good and cant wait to read more like them

FireontheWingsFireontheWingsabout 14 years ago
Lovely

It was short, sweet and to the point. I liked it, it was very unique.

hentaikittenhentaikittenalmost 7 years ago
Good concept

I think the idea behind this story is good but it needs work. The women are very two-dimensional and need more characterization. They should also be described more as well as the gryphon so the reader can get a better mental picture of them. Also, the responses of the women are a little rote and unbelievable. I mean, come on, one lick and they're cumming? I wish it was that easy!! And the ending seems very abrupt. Didn't both these women say that they were destined to be leaders in their own communities? Yet they throw all that away without a second thought just from one fuck from a gryphon.

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