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Tales of the eKids:.. Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/11/04

Hot diggity dog!!!

So happy to see this story, and it was fun, to boot. I already wish there were more...

Thanks!!!

Deb

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by Anonymous05/11/04

A nice beginning, intriguing and humorous

I'm so happy this series is being continued. A few changes, and new characters, and a whole lot of fun!

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by amicus06/15/04

Excellent

Once again you have a fast moving well written futuristic yarn unraveling in the best of all possible ways. A pleasure to read...amicus

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by physicalard03/17/06

Amazing

First made me laugh uncontrollably, with lines like "Follow the bouncing butt." Outright hillarious, then brought me to tears with the emotional escriptions. Another winner.

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