All Comments on '1714 Ch. 01'

Waiting eagerly for the next part!

I know this is a made up story, but I could not get into it

I think its a good piece, but dont want the torture of the poor slave, if u have a second publish please.....let there be a happy ending

Kiwi gal

This is some demented shit! Who takes their Rolls Royce or Ferrari and do 100mph down a pothole dilapidated street. I'm not liking the way they're treating the slave. It's abuse not BDSM. But I will hold out for chapter 2.

Please continue the story

Need the next chapter, please. Great so far

Please please? I want to see what happens! I want it brutal. Please? The description, the way the words are written... You can't leave me with an effing cliffhanger!