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Enemy Lines Ch. 07

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by Anonymous09/01/16

Not bad for what it was.

I give it a 3 star. It was short but it was well written.

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by Anonymous09/01/16

is there going to be #8?

it was short and it seem to early to end it all

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by Anonymous09/20/16

Please Continue

Not bad....

It would nice if you added updates on you main page.

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You touched a sore spot. I hope she doesn't die. This story is still brilliant. Just like humans to cultivate a bully-variation of itself - it's okay to be different in that way, but fuck forbid if you're not up for the squabble - then you get a mouthful of nuke. Bloody stupid parasite monkeys.

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