All Comments on 'Sex in Paradise'

Nice and erotica. Got me very horny.

Hi Anonymous. Thank your for reading and taking the time to comment. I'm glad that you enjoyed my short scenario. Unykorn

This is a very erotic story. Over looking the minor punctuation elements that aren't really that distracting, you painted a wonderful story with words that was easy to visualize. Keep up the great work!

Thank you for reading and for your wonderful comment. I am glad that you enjoyed this story. Unykorn

That's when I figured she was in for it or it in her. I would love to show you (a good time at) my beach Balboa here in so. cal. No Villa butt nice considering. Summer's not over yet another night at her villa and a swim of course.

Thank you for reading my Scene and taking the time to comment. I am very glad that you enjoyed the story. Unykorn

Average. Not very erotic. Keep trying