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Still Waters

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by jthserra05/03/04

An interesting look at rivers...

and what flows there deep within, we are all that way, clear clean and bloody. Very good...


jim : )

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by 05/04/04

Yes,

very nice indeed... enjoyed the water metaphor.. is that one line supposed to be sticking out that far?

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