All Comments on 'Breaking My Own Rules Ch. 03'

by Chimera44

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

He's a rather appealing pushy stalker, isn't he? Rather scary. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Yes!

Hope you continue this story.

HukilauHukilauover 7 years ago
Wonderful, PLEASE continue!

I have enjoyed all 3 segments very much. Skylar's transformation is facinating and Sir's honesty refreshing. Please continue the story.

RunsAmokRunsAmokover 7 years ago
Wow!

I don't think the phrase "please, sir" has ever been more erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Does she even know his name yet?

I don't remember seeing it, but my glasses are all fogged up! Steamy....

-- shemar

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I find the interludes - at work, with co-workers, in bars, most enjoyable. Very well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I'm out

Sorry, I'm out

he pushes past the no means no and puts a tracking app on her phone without permission.

Regardless of how it worked out, He is a creepy stalker prick that cant respect boundaries. Not trustworthy.

I know it all fantasy, but I need a story where I can at least engage with a character.

He is a pile of crap to try to turn into a "hero" type...Nope, don't work for me.

Sorry.

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