Caught in the Act Pt. 01

The problem with this story...

The problem with this story...Her sudden change from almost asexual to a wanton woman in minutes...Where will all this take the marriage? 2* for now

Isn't it a little convenient that she suddenly had the outfit for him an hour later, but hadn't wanted sex with him much?

Oh, Yeah

You may not know, but all of us know.. Your life is over, so start the divorce now.
When she brings the bulls home and the gangbangs start without you, you will wish you had. Why stay and pay for her new found freedom from Guilt with your unhappiness and loss of respect. She is a smart evil bitch.

This has all the hallmarks of an epic disaster in the making

...as the other comments so far have alluded to.

If this guy wants to have a life and any self-respect left to himself going down the road, he MUST grab the reigns NOW and force the lines of communication open that have been badly neglected between them. Any other course of action WILL lead to ultimate disaster by any one of dozens if not hundreds of roads - all bad in varying degrees, flavors, and tempos.

The _really_ correct last part of the story would have been to torture her similarly to how she treated HIM upon his return by edging her and withholding her oral orgasm under HIS questioning about HER motivations for the sudden change of heart/attitude.

I give this a 4 star.

Partly because it so far involves only the two of them and it's about fantasy.

I would be interested to read about it from her perspective or at least a conversation where they discuss their sex life, or lack thereof and how both of them can change. Because despite the authors assurances, no guy is going to go down on a woman for 30 minutes. My tongue and lips start to go numb after 10 minutes, 30 minutes would be hell.

Also, what has he done to romance his wife? Sex is a two way street and for women, sex starts in the kitchen (as an old preacher friend of mine once said).

He died and went to heaven

5*. Not surprised impo and his anon asswipe buddy showed up to trash the story. Keep writing.

A Idea

Maybe if we lighten up on the hate comments then the good writers may come back with good stories..The good writers here do not post anymore..Any wonder why??

There's only one answer. YES

I don't see any downside tonight. I hope you don't find the time to jack off again and if you do don't get caught. I'd give her a workout she wouldn't forget anytime soon.
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Good start

This is a pretty good start to what I hope is an ongoing story.

I would like to see some more discussion of why she suddenly changed from being uninterested in sex and pleasing to a woman interested in pleasing him. Finding your husband looking at porn is not generally enough motivation for a woman to suddenly change a long standing pattern.

@A(n) Idea Good writers rarely get bad comments

We have more than our share of not-so-good writers who post inflammatory trolling stories in the wrong category and they deserve bad comments.

Of course some excellent writers (eg blackrandi1958) get negative comments from marginal writers who boost their egos by attempting to tear down superior work and by posturing as superior more enlightened thinkers or writers (which they certainly are not). Those commenters may encourage better authors to seek other venues.

Marriage counseling?

OK, I have to ask several people who have commented: Am I writing an article about marriage counseling or am I writing erotic porn. I thought it was the latter, but maybe I am mistaken. Not all of my stories are going to be "The husband has the best sex life." I try to take real world scenarios (last I saw, there are a lot of husbands with low or no sex drive wives out there) and put an erotic twist into it.

My guess...

She's been cheating on him all along. She hasn't lost interest in sex, just with him, because her extramarital lover has taken over her thoughts. She had the red outfit hidden away for the other guy and dragged it out for hubby. As someone else implied, here come the threesomes, the swapping, etc.

@foolscap

it is that thinking that is what's wrong with this genre. Most of these writers aren't "trolling" for bad comments. They are sharing their fantasies. It is people like you who feel that they have the pretentious right to tell them where they should and shouldn't post their stories.

People like you are what's wrong. Not liking the story is not an excuse to disrespect someone. No one deserves disrespect unless they give it. These writers don't deserve disrespect, no matter what holier than thou ideas you have in your head.

You have all of these claims about swinger joe, but you are his opposite. You have a superiority complex about your "enlightenment". You feel like you are smarter than everyone else around you. Only the authors that you find worthy deserve respect. anyone who disrespects your favorites are jealous and inferior. Sound familiar? Everything you say about him, is something you see because IT IS YOU.

Rant over.

Lex1 re:"People like you are what's wrong"

You might want to take some of your own advice there Lex. Talk about an imperious blowhard.Do you really believe the tripe you spread? God, what a self absorbed boob.I agree foolscaps no brain surgeon but you sir are over the top full of it.BTW This was a pretty good start to a story.Looking forward to more

"I agree fools caps no brain surgeon"

LOL my vote for comment of the year!!!!

I suspect even dumpster diving is beyond his abilities!

So to the story

This story covers two major areas where wives fail in relationships.

1/ is the slow down (abandonment) of marital relations
2/ the perception that looking at porn is directed at them personally

In the story she suddenly reverts back to this sexy wannabee. I don't buy it. It's too sudden. There's an old saying that "tigers don't change their stripes". Experience has taught me that's very true UNLESS someone commits to something different and makes a change over a long period of time.

Perhaps there's more coming in the story so I'm holding off voting until I see what develops.

So very much agree

With gordo12's comment.

@anonymous

At least make your comment readable, especially if you are going to say that someone else isn't a brain surgeon. Lol. At least foolscap can put together simple sentences.

Now, now, boys.

A little on edge are we there, Lexipoo? Why go on this tirade against Foolscap? He has the right to express his opinion just like everyone else. You don’t like his opinion, we get that, but the site does, that’s why they allow all of us to come on here and express our opinion. It brings in views. You frequently go off on other people who comment, why can’t Foolscap? I happen to agree with him, but that’s beside the point.

He didn’t mention dear old Joe; you put the name out there. He mentioned one name. So, my question is, why do you hate Randi so much? I know why dear old Joe hates her; he’s jealous. What’s your excuse? Why are you constantly defending that cowardly no-talent? Did you see his comment on “First Steps to Being a Cuckold," attacking Randi?” It was a thousand times more egregious than Foolscap’s comment here. Not only that, Foolscap was right. That’s exactly what dear old Joe does. Read his comment on “First Steps” for proof. Not a word from that sexy beast, Lexipoo, in response to Joe's comment, but you go off on Foolscap for being right? Be fair, now. A thousand thermionic kisses, you love god.

@ kimi

Where did you get that I hate Randi? I like her writing; told her so on many occasions. Why do people feel that speaking against her fans is speaking against her? What is this with us or against us mentality? I don't have to agree with everything to still like the same things. Just like I can like the same things and completely disagree with everything else.

I mentioned SJ because Foolscap constantly criticizes him, get does the EXACT same thing. Now, most people want to try to throw me into some kind of group with SJ simply because I mentioned that. That's the with us or against us mentality. I call him out on things that I feel he does wrong all of the time. One example was his story subtly throwing the two "andis" under the bus.

Foolscap is always telling these authors that they don't belong. Whether he overtly insinuate it or simply calls it fetish. He is wrong for doing so. He is the flip side of Joe. Just because he is on your team doesn't mean you guys have to always defend each other.

I can like some of the same authors that he does and still call bullshit.

Great start

Just don't do cuckolding. That would ruin the whole story line for me.

foolscap thinks witting cucks who are sexual masochists and women who are sexual sadists belong in fetish

and I'm right.

I only confront joe when he tosses in half-truths and untruths and he offers sage advice to those who are far superior story tellers and writers. and I don't remember mentioning joe by name. that's on your lexy.

My spider sense is buzzing hard for our misbehaving hero. And I have some thoughts...

...about why he should get running for the hills.
He's got 15 years on her and she's got the latest 400 videos of widely varying porn she wants to act out with him.
Five will get you twenty, she's gonna bring in other players and fuck around with them, calling it fair, because he's "involved" and each event will be modeled after one or another of his sexual fantasies, based on his browsing record. Boy, that could get ugly fast....mainly because he'll be cast in the 'brunt of the joke' role, not the 'guy that gets the hot girl and hot sex' role.
Oh, and in a mostly sexless marriage (for 15 years!), according to our hero, where did wifey suddenly turn up out of the blue, in two hours or less with a red satin French maid's outfit? Seems like there's some 'splainin' to do on her side before the new rules can apply.
They always stir you up and make you stupid with desire, then extract lop-sided promises from you before you discover the Faustian deal you just struck, screws you over but good for the next 2 years or more.
See, I'm already suspicious that she lost interest in sex with hubby 15 years ago, because she's been playin' on the side all that time and has found a way to bring hubby into the mix, but in a position of constant or nearly constant humiliation, degradation....etc. in the name of 'fun' from the fantasy videos he watched.....only he won't be the lead guy, he'll be the bystander, while she openly fucks the brains out of her long term lover(s) while he looks on...hoping for something that will never come.
He can always change his mind and dump her as soon as it all comes clear, but these kinds of stories almost never go that way. Usually, the poor fool of a main character is locked, nay, imprisoned by his magically irreversible decision, extracted in a moment of heated passion (a form of duress, to be clear) and seemingly cast in stone for millennia to come.
I really, really, truly hope you don't take this down cuckold lane. I doubt I would survive the disappointment.
Looking forward to being delighted and surprised, but with a certain trepidation that this is just another thinly veiled version of that same old cuck-story line that's been bouncing around here and too often rerun with new window-dressing for years.
Thank you.

You sound like joe

But whatever. You have your beliefs, just like everyone else. You are just as right as he is in his. I wasn't looking to stir the pot with this one. Just wanted to let you know how your egotistical bullshit is the same as his. If you don't see the similarities just because you happen to be on the side that most agree with, then that's on you.

Fag Cuck Shit

I am not ready to lump this here yet. The big reason is because this guy nailed too many items that hit way too close to home. The internet of 2001 and the time it took to load pictures made visual stimuli for whacking purposes really obnoxious. As the quality improved so did the quantity and the oppotunities to abuse the turgid trunk.
Then there is the 'oh shit busted' moment. Followed immediately by the 'I gotta get out of here' escape and the eventual 'face the embarrassment' reconcliation.
Pretty sure wife never cheated but for a while things got better. Rinse. Repeat.
The idea she had a sexy outfit is a bit out there but not that far fetched. I am intrigued if only for the fact my browser history has some hot girl on girl action that would be awesome to view up close and personal. I hope it goes that way but its not my story. Good job so far. 4*

Envious

Man, I should be so lucky.

As someone else said, "My spidey senses are tingling."

You're on a good track. Just don't get derailed by bringing another person into this.

Good Start***

Looking forward to next chapters. Thanks for sharing.