Nice teaser opening....story should continue though...also needs proofreading or turn auto-correct off.
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Anonymous09/12/16
This could be the start of something Remarkable
Wow, what an opening! This is Drug Trials good. Well written characters, layered storytelling and witty dialogue only helps to make the sex better. I hope there are plans for a Ch.2.
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Anonymous09/21/16
good start can't wait to see more
This is good could be a really well written series in the 3c world
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Anonymous09/28/16
more soon?
Enjoyed this it made a good opener, I hope to see another story soon in the 3c world really missing the great new reads.
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Nice teaser opening....story should continue though...also needs proofreading or turn auto-correct off.
This could be the start of something Remarkable
Wow, what an opening! This is Drug Trials good. Well written characters, layered storytelling and witty dialogue only helps to make the sex better. I hope there are plans for a Ch.2.
good start can't wait to see more
This is good could be a really well written series in the 3c world
more soon?
Enjoyed this it made a good opener, I hope to see another story soon in the 3c world really missing the great new reads.
what a start
Can't wait to see this story develop.
Thank you. This series takes a little time for me because I want it to be perfect. Don't worry, it is in the works, I just don't have an eta.
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