Friends Always

Means a lot

A story that really gets at the sexual, the emotional and the fragility of both sides in a relationship involving TG

Might be the most realistic story on here.

And that's what makes it heartbreaking.

Well..its true...Words.. can Destroy.... I wad really loving the over all..of your story... until the End... heartbroken...an Words simply cant express....
Being a trans..of 20yrs now... I understand. . Both their pain... But was never bad enough to hurt myself.....
AS Rupaul always says..."How the Hell you gonna love...someone Else if you Dont love yourself First"

Thank You

Thank you for adding the reality of the battle so many face. The battles for acceptance, respect, genuine caring, and to just be treated as a person. I am not a cd or transgendered, but know from others the shame that is cast upon them. The courage they show everyday just living what is in their hearts is absolutely remarkable.
Again, thank you.

Thanks All

Thanks for the compliments, glad you enjoyed my story. Writing about a transgender character was a fun challenge, a radical departure from my romance and erotic couplings offerings.

Oh damn...

I was not expecting that at all. Very powerful. thank you.
I don't think I'd be able to live with myself if I was in Chip's shoes.

Of course...I don't think I'd have done what he did to Ashley either.

Unexpected

I've never written a comment on here before, but I had to after reading this. When I clicked on this story I anticipated an incredibly different story. This work touched me on a really personal level. I'm a straight male who obviously reads stories about transexual females.

This story has several parallels to my real life. I was a high school athelete who silently watched as my teammates and friends belittled an openly gay student in our class. I work in a bar that was frequented by a transsexual women who used to flirt with me before I gave her the cold shoulder after a co-worker commented about it. Despite my 6'6 frame I feel about an inch tall right now. Even writing this I'm too embarassed to create an account in the small chance its linked back to me.

Amazing story! Absolutely loved it!

Again, Thanks for the Positve Feedback

I didn't expect my story to resonate the way it has with some of the readers here. What a pleasant surprise that it does. A writer couldn't ask for a greater compliment.

It was different

In the way that it was written, as well as the way that it ended. I'm not to happy about the ending, to be honest lol. But it was still a good story. Just wish it had of ended a bit happier.

Not wrong... but...

well I'm glad I finished myself before I finished the story, you know?

moving

Please allow me to thank you for this wonderful story. I thought it was written so well. I found it both moving and incredibly sad,i wonder how true your story reflects real life, so much joy, so much sadness. May god bless you and keep you.

beautiful love story

Excellent , sexy love story . The ending so close to reality for some in the trans community.

Very passive

99% passive voice throughout. It felt like a documentary or maybe an attempt at a screenplay. A great story contained within, but the telling was flawed. Love to see you rework this and bring true life to it. You've got the talent, just need to learn the tools.

99% Passive???

I know what a passive narrative voice is but don't know how it applies to my story. Please explain.