Can Do Candy

-10

Pity i can't give negative points

What the hell is wrong with you?

I've been trying to be nicer to the authors but then you show up with this wad of excrement that you shat out after a hard buttfucking from your boyfriend and gave it to us? The fuck did we do to deserve this pitiful excuse of a story?

Do us a favour, next time you feel the urge to write something, take your hand and shove it up your ass, maybe you'll find some brains there.

Shut the fuck up and shoot yourself!

nuff said

Pointless

Sorry, but there's nothing even slightly interesting or creative or original or amusing about this 'story' at all. It's only redeeming characteristic is it's brevity.

Why did you

Refer to her as your wife in the last sentence? You are going to kill her and go to prison aren't you? After all your wife is gone, her love is gone, your house is gone, your money is gone, your job is gone, your respect and self-respect have hit new lows; so don't let her have your balls too. Grow at least a small pair and get rid of them both... there are to many Bs & Bs in the world (Bitches & Bulls) anyway.
And no I am not just AGW I believe in preventative and restorative action and at some price tothe receiver of my consternation.

Is really the writer expecting comments on this?

Is really the writer expecting comments on this? How can we comment a story (?) passed in another galaxy with no police or courts? Unless...The writer is trying to piss off the readers!! A so old method that this seems "copy and paste" from one of those attempts...1* (Where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

sorry

this is just not my cup of tea

is this writer off his meds:

wow what a load of sick shit .. can i give minus -5* for this

Come back with your buddies Smith and Wesson and escort both of them out of your house unless this is what you want

Complete crap

What worthless horseshit. The writer is obviously a total loser.

1*

fag cuck shit.

What was this supposed to be?

What was this supposed to be?

And The Point Of This Is...........?

Yeesh. No set up, no execution, no resolution. Just hello welcome to hell!

JimC

Obviously just a troll

This story was written just to piss people off. Probably Swingerjoe in another one of his persona's

No comment...1*

No comment...1*

What .......

What just happened ? Did it fly over our heads or did we miss something on here that was not interesting but we read it anyway.? LOL We are not as smart as we thought we were are 'we'..!? ''''''' ''' '''' ''''' lol Okay Martha you can cum out now.! hehe
Could we please have a rerun on this one as I think we missed something here.! lol
Eh ..... gave you a "1" as it don't go no lower.!*

5

annony is an old ugly fat fag fool

Part 2

I hope the second part is about revenge

Mother of Invention

This is the kind of situation that murder was invented for.

Glock 40 cal

Yep - get up from his slapping and go to my gun safe and grab my Glock - Start with knee caps then elbows and finally blow off his balls. Next I take my hunting knife and cut off his cock and stuff it in the wives mouth and leave.

Consider this

Give a blowjob to a .45. It'd be better that way.

Why?

I can't believe there is anyone who would find this erotic, and it is barely a story; certainly it is in no way creative. So why write and submit it?

Utter drivel

There is something really wrong with you. Don't pollute us with this trash again.

Absured nonsense

...How can a mature white male write such unmitigated tripe? 1 star *

re: anonymous-5

Describing yourself?

Wish it was longer

Great story ignore the haters write more!

you need help.

But I don't care if you get it or not.

Another absolutely stupid story.

I'm sure the author is the wimp in this story. Only a fucking closet cocksucker could come up with it.

Goddamm it, another fucking spawn or abortion of that puke bt2 or vasieassie.

Dam glad, I read the comments first. Folks, by pass this pile of dogshit.

eviltwin52 Get a life...

another writer loser middle aged ugly fat fuck who hasn't had a sex life in the last two decades. This is a ridiculous, unrealistic sad and pathetic piece of shit

Nightmare

A horror story of a husbands worst fear.

If it smells like dog shit, squishes like dogs hit and is covered with flies like dog shit....

....it is very likely, dog shit!
After surviving THAT experience, with all the laws of nearly every commonwealth on the planet being broken, it would be a good time to sneak out, drop by the local armory for a howitzer and a 30mm Hellfire Gatling gun, along with a truckload of rounds. Drive over to Vince's digs and unload a little gift full of "FUCK YOU, ASSHOLE!!" and level the dump, with him in it. Set fire to his chick-mobile, then go home and do the same with wifey and the house....hey, most insurances will pay for "acts of God" if properly purchased. I would say a shitstorm of those proportions would actually have to qualify, just like a flood or tornado.....wouldn't you?
Cheesy, trite, deplorable and a waste of good ones and zeros.
No. Thank. You.

i wonder

i think this writer has to be a black guy who wants u all to believe that a lot of people get off on this bullshit.

you are

either dumb below 80 iq points or a lot lower a frustrated little wanker

@Anonymous 09/03/16

re:
i wonder
i think this writer has to be a black guy who wants u all to believe that a lot of people get off on this bullshit.
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That is more likely than you might think.

Cuckolding porn is a social engineering program designed to make accepting cuckolds out of normal men.

Tell a lie often enough and it becomes accepted as truth.

This story is NOT badly written

Many people obviously disagree with the subject matter and vote it down because they have some sort of psychological need to punish the author for what his character is doing in the story. But what some of you fools don't seem to get is, that the very reason you are getting so angry is because the the story is written well enough to grab your emotions.

So the more angry you are, the higher you should score this story. Because it clearly works on you.

Your a pansy ass

hey nigger lover

get hang

Wrong Category!!! Gay Male! That gets 0 stars. Fetish! 1 Star

Pleas stop writing!

I HATED this

I was just plain disgusting.*0*

Sexy

Got me day dreqming.. and cumming thank you

Excellent Story

You had me from the first paragraph. Super hot.

One Star

A wimpy ass main character written by a wimpy ass writer.

not into wimp

not into to the wimp part of loving wife. and they need to start a wimp branch, there so many o u typing that stuff now.

That was just the first part.

Next part: That night when she thought he was asleep, he got up tied her spread eagle to the bed. Proceeded to spank her ass(no beat her ass) and then packed up. Left town next day never to return. When Vince returned he thought seeing her like that mad him mad ( ha). Well hubby waited a good two years, returned one night in the middle of the night. Blew out all the tires on the car in the driveway, and when they came out, stun gunned them to silence. Then he tied Vinces hands and legs together, and took him out to the forest. Tied him to a tree butt naked, no way out. Went and took his two pet racoons and let them out-and made sure Vinces balls were chewed off by them. Now thats an ending to an aweful story. Oh he did same thing to wife.

If This is your Idea of a Story......

Don't quit your day job...