This was sweet and I hope to read a continuation in the future!
5*
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Anonymous09/04/16
very nice
yes, please write additional chapters.
by
Anonymous09/15/16
Umm if you're going to write a child in have it at least realistic. A child who sucks her thumb isn't old enough to speak the way she did when she met Tim. And she's old enough to understand 'mummy time' and that sometimes that involves men? And still sucks her thumb. How old is she? She goes to school? That put me off. no score.
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This was sweet and I hope to read a continuation in the future!
5*
very nice
yes, please write additional chapters.
Umm if you're going to write a child in have it at least realistic. A child who sucks her thumb isn't old enough to speak the way she did when she met Tim. And she's old enough to understand 'mummy time' and that sometimes that involves men? And still sucks her thumb. How old is she? She goes to school? That put me off. no score.
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