it seems that Kristin wants more, do not know why the way Harper treated her but oh well to each their own I guess
Four stars, but could have been five... For all the nice buildup, the actual sex was too rushed - verging on non-erotic. But happy to read a second instalment. xx
If Harper had been called Harry, then this would have been nothing more than an unpleasant rape story. Just not my kind of thing, I guess.
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it seems that Kristin wants more, do not know why the way Harper treated her but oh well to each their own I guess
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Four stars, but could have been five...
For all the nice buildup, the actual sex was too rushed - verging on non-erotic.
But happy to read a second instalment.
xx
Not a nice story
If Harper had been called Harry, then this would have been nothing more than an unpleasant rape story. Just not my kind of thing, I guess.
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