Backfired

Mixed emotions?

A fucking bar slut. mixed emotions? The no good bitch went there to fuck, or she would have went to a movie. As soon as she bet her panties at billiards, she knew she was going to be fucked by the whole crew. Next time her husband was away again, she'd probably go there to be "raped" agfain. That is if the slut wasn't dead from aids.

well fuck

Just because the story didn't make your cock swell... IF you have a cock, and one wonders about the size after your comment... pinkie comes to mind!

How dare you berate this author's work! Who the fuck are you? Why be a faceless coward so we can't pass the same judgement on your work? Or are you just another nameless wanker who gets his rocks off by belittling others?

Get a life you ass...

Marriedpervs... delete this and the ass' comment... sorry I can't stand the fucking juveniles that get on here!!!!

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No surprise

Nice story, she got what she asked for.

Love the comment from Australia

If this was a try at sarcasm, it was a failure.

Morone berates others for being anonymous and remains anonymous itself, all the while getting its rocks off belittling others. LOL

What a stupid author.

To believe the law wouldn’t prosecute for rape. Her reasons for being there are not relevant. In real life some people would have gone to prison or, if she prefered, the owners of the establishment would have faced a million dollar lawsuit leaving them bankrupted. Of course, the owners know that so it would be impossible for the event to happen.

I wish these ignorant writers would research a little before writing such garbage and wasting the readers’ time.

I could not agree more

with your Australian comment of 5/21/04. What a pathetic comment. And what a pathetic writer of it. I bet his dick isn't long enough to play with, let alone pee out of. Go and suck yourself and if you cannot reach because it is such a small winkie then try writing some stories yourself, and see if you can grow.

I could not agree more

with your Australian comment of 5/21/04. What a pathetic comment. And the last one before this, too. Why read it if you you are only going to be nasty. Or can you read? And what pathetic writers of those comments. I bet their dicks aren't long enough to play with, let alone pee out of. Go and suck yourselves and if you cannot reach because they are such small winkies then try writing some stories yourselves, and see if you can grow.

Lame end but Ok.

try more build up The explicit bits are good but are just strok fodder. Try het the eaders brain involved about what might be about to hapen then do something different!

She got what she wanted

Not my favorite kind of story.
She went, without hubby, to a pool hall/bar, dressed to kill (or get fucked), deliberately teased all and every man in the house, bet her pants on a game of pool and, at the end, she had mixed emotions about getting gang-banged? - hmmm. - Why? - She got what she went there for.
You have to feel sorry for her husband who, presumably, doesn't know what garbage he is married to - poor sucker.

I would have had to taste her asshole while she was laying there. Spreading her asscheeks wide and sniff her bunghole before I give it long slow licks. Apply my mouth and suck the taste right out. Stab my tongue in and out of her Dumper, stretching her hole and making it wet before I bury my cock balls deep inside. Piston away and deposit my seed deep in her bowels.

If It's Not Too Much To Ask

What is a "travagement?" I'm in the States, is that a word used where you're from? Just curious.

Deserves less than 1 one

Another gangbang slut with a cuck husband story. This one didn't even have a beginning or an end.