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YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Un-Bending Desires

The poet creates unusual images with his novel use of words,

often it is difficult to follow the theme skein throughout his poems.

This time the thesis is there, but I find the title slightly mismatched until one sees an active verb form.

My favorite passage:

"Take the end

put it at

the beginning,

would any do

other than what they did."

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