NightSide Ch. 02

I'm intrigued

I have commented on other stories about the creativity of this author, and this story is really testing my ability to follow. I assume that I was not the only reader who had to go back and check through Ch.1 to re-establish my connection to the story.

I'm fascinated by where it is heading.

Lue
Ps:: At last, somebody who spells the extensions of 'empathy' the same way that I do.

First chapter was great, I'll wait to see if the next is better than this one, that's if I live long enough to see it.

first chapter should also been open to rating

would have given 10 *s rather than a mere 5