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by jthserra05/08/04

I loved the strong images

of the storm, the language added a forboding that did darken the mood. I was distracted by the ~*. I felt your words stood well on their own and the stanza breaks gave you the distinct break you needed. An excellent poem.


jim : )

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by thegirlfriday1105/08/04

very good

i really like this one too

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