The Lion's Cage Ch. 01

Nice start

Questions, which could be addressed in later installments: First, wouldn't she have been captured with other members of her unit, who might know her or at least defend her? Second, what had she done with her voice before she was captured to keep her secret? It seems odd that she would have been operating and captured alone. Third, is this group multi-national, multi-lingual, multi-religious? Those things, which might be possible with a force that includes non-interested combatants like the narrator, could make the story more interesting.

Please write more

I really liked this story and I would really like you to continue

This could be a gem. Write it.