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by Anonymous

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by sexymeup09/10/16

no details

don't think you even tried to put any effort into the story...one star, even that was too much.

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by Anonymous09/11/16

Bored

You sounded bored. Sorry!

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by Anonymous09/14/16

Positive comment

interesting plot

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by KingCuddle09/19/16

Welllll...it IS to the point! :+))

It's more like samples, with a summary?

If you want to develop your writing craft...I recommend the writings of
Kethandra and C C Rider.

Their use of specific details in the unfolding stories is exquisite.

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