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Great start
Part 2 needs to include her viirgin ass
GREAT
VERY WELL DONE !! NOW,.... PLEASE DO NOT KEEP US WAITING LONG FOR CHAPTER TWO. ALSO NOTE THAT MANY OLDER WOMEN DO NOT CARE FOR ANAL SEX SO IT IS REALLY YOUR DECISION ON HOW TO PROCEED WITH YOUR STORY. IN ANY EVENT I AM CERTAIN THAT IT WILL EXCEL. THANKS AND GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR FUTURE WRITING ENDEAVORS.
Interesting story
The few young guys like Jack that are into older women have found a good thing. Usually no drama and hot NSA sex..
Anti-gun crap was unnecessary and a real distraction!
The early ,"Does your husband have a gun?" question was a real turn-off for me.
I don't see...
...how his having a short, thin pens added ANYTHING to the story.
Good point re the gun....
Au contraire, sweetie, the question about the gun was an integral part of the story. "Anti-gun crap" indeed! Whoever wrote that sounds like a grade A asshole. Let's have some more smokin' hot sex between these two...
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