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by Anonymous

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by impressive08/06/04

Tease us some more!

Scintillating stuff, that.

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by Anonymous10/12/04

the story absolutely sucks

the story absolutely suck.....the guy should ask for help writing

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by Anonymous02/19/05

From your son

The only reason I didn't give it a 100 is b/c it's my dad and it freakss me out that he could lead a reader down a path of sexual thoughts like that.

Good story.

-SLSuch

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by Anonymous12/18/06

Liked it!

Never would've guessed! Quite a fun read, but it could've been longer...but then, I'm not an author.

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by Absinth303/18/16

what a tease!

I loved it!

I do hope you're still writing and sharing it somewhere - it would be a shame keep your wit and talent under wraps.

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