Not only was that the single stupidest thing I have ever read (the entire story, not just the end), there have been at least 10 stories on this site alone with similar endings. Don't quit your day job.
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Anonymous05/15/06
The Had Balls
Good story; proper ending. The only change I would have made would have been for her to hold on to his balls as a keepsake by which to remember him as she shoved him out the window.
I hope you keep writing. Don;t let one negative comment get to you.
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good lord
Not only was that the single stupidest thing I have ever read (the entire story, not just the end), there have been at least 10 stories on this site alone with similar endings. Don't quit your day job.
The Had Balls
Good story; proper ending. The only change I would have made would have been for her to hold on to his balls as a keepsake by which to remember him as she shoved him out the window.
I hope you keep writing. Don;t let one negative comment get to you.
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