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All the effort put into that story....
and that was the ending? What a wasted opportunity.
Wow
I waited for this..... This sucked
There is more to the story obviously.
Cant wait till the next book.
Did you get bored with it ?
What a feeble and insulting end to a story that showed great promise. It would have been better to follow the greater Literotica tradition and leave it unfinished.
Author's Note to Readers and Playlist
Hello Dear Readers,
I didnt know this was going to post today. I would have added the note earlier, to calm your hearts. I know the ending is a bit... not what you expected. Please don't vote down. What Gaelen does next will surprise you.
Book 2 and 3 are in various phases of drafts and Book 2 is about 40% complete and Book 3 20%
Since I can't post links in the story.
Here is the playlist for this book: https://open.spotify.com/user/1252218348/playlist/3 S4QVroENhJ8CV5rbyjNIA
Read the end and listen to this song into Book 2:
"This World" by Lena Fayre. And of course listen to Mozart's Lacrymosa through all three books.
If I post Book 2, I'll update the playlist songs if that what you enjoy.
Until then, writing away.
Cheers and Happy Reading,
~Talyis
Wrong Section
It doesn't matter much about the crappy ending because it is posted in a completely different section to the rest of the story and hopefully most people won't read it.
disappointed
you had this great story going and then you go and rush a lackluster ending. I enjoyed the first 17 chapters immensely. This almost seems like you got bored with the story. Not to mention ending it with no resolution what so ever.
That being said, I do hope you continue this series in another book. And I hope you explain what the hell just happened.
What crap
Ha! What a shit ending.....
What is wrong with you readers?
Yes the story ended, but it doesn't say that he killed her! She has strange abilities of her own that may save her! Does he believe that it's his duty as a leader to kill her or to save her? This is just a big cliff-hanger! I can't wait to read the next story!
Katgoddess1
(Literotica is being strange and denying my login.)
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