It a good story but the story description does not match the story.
The story itself is fine but the description under the title was "brother has a small dick". The story suggests the opposite is true.
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Anonymous09/10/16
coulda been
My title says it all. It coulda been really good. She didn't get her brother laid. She didn't fuck him either. He just jerked off on her. The title you gave this stated that her brother had a small dick and the story doesn't bear that out. They have no privacy, with Jack in the next room, and there'd be Hell to pay in the morning when Jack found her with Tommy's cum (the only other male in the dorm room) dried on her belly. Plus he'd be doubly tempted to rat out Tommy and his sister since he himself had not gotten laid that night. I don't give this a 'I hated it' rating because I reserve that for stories that end up being rape stories without warning me before had so that I can avoid them. But this is bad.
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Anonymous09/10/16
not good sorry 2 stars
wasnt a verry good story bro i mean no charracter background so no imagination on what they would look like then everything go's so fast also his when he reveals his love for her with his dick out thats just stupid her accepting it even stupider i mean i am sure jack would hear them fuck so in my thoughts the story ended like this jack filmed it called the cops in the morning & tommy & his sister got arrested.
Jack's is dbag...the heck with that loser. Tommy is the man!
From my experience those that are named Jack are brian dead losers who live in their parents' attic...this Jack is no different. You never make a move on your roommate's sister...never!
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bring an only child I get a kick out of bro sis stories.
You couldn't be bothered with character development so I didn't bother with giving you a high score.
It a good story but the story description does not match the story.
The story itself is fine but the description under the title was "brother has a small dick". The story suggests the opposite is true.
coulda been
My title says it all. It coulda been really good. She didn't get her brother laid. She didn't fuck him either. He just jerked off on her. The title you gave this stated that her brother had a small dick and the story doesn't bear that out. They have no privacy, with Jack in the next room, and there'd be Hell to pay in the morning when Jack found her with Tommy's cum (the only other male in the dorm room) dried on her belly. Plus he'd be doubly tempted to rat out Tommy and his sister since he himself had not gotten laid that night. I don't give this a 'I hated it' rating because I reserve that for stories that end up being rape stories without warning me before had so that I can avoid them. But this is bad.
not good sorry 2 stars
wasnt a verry good story bro i mean no charracter background so no imagination on what they would look like then everything go's so fast also his when he reveals his love for her with his dick out thats just stupid her accepting it even stupider i mean i am sure jack would hear them fuck so in my thoughts the story ended like this jack filmed it called the cops in the morning & tommy & his sister got arrested.
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Jack's is dbag...the heck with that loser. Tommy is the man!
From my experience those that are named Jack are brian dead losers who live in their parents' attic...this Jack is no different. You never make a move on your roommate's sister...never!
Please write more
That's all, just write more
SPH?
So confused, why is this tagged with sph, and small penis?
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