All Comments on 'asunder'

A very beautiful poem.

Thank you for your feedback, Visioneer. :)

Sparse and elegant

Your words ring true for those of us who risk the heart for the quickened pulse from the touch of another. Thank you for this.

Well you found the Pobo, pretty good poem, wandering rhyme (a good thing )

evenly metered requires some discipline, although there is much to experience on poetry forms and un-forms. try some haiku and free form

All erotica starts in the heart, the sexiest sex organ is by far the brain. You are very sexy!

My heart has followed all my days something I cannot name !! Perhaps it’s you :) Write me at gavican2003@att.net if you want to discuss your poem in greater depth.

Prof Gav