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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/10/16

Ends too soon

Boy would I appreciate A few additionnal pages to see the end of this very well presented teaser.´´

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by Anonymous09/11/16

Is that the end? Boring start to have it just end, did you give up? If its a multi part story say so in the title.

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by Anonymous09/11/16

now that you have teased us

great start to a great story. now please finish the story

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by TheOldRomantic09/11/16

This story seems to be great!

As well is a short story, That's seems to be great!
I hope that`s is only the first chapter and the tale is to be continued.
Good start for a series.

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by txsweetheart2209/15/16

Please finish this story! I want to know what happens in that treehouse!

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