All Comments on 'Crashland'

This was an amazing story and you could possibly keep it going man!

I really like the plot. Very enjoyable story. Thank you!

Can we get some more stories with Beanstalk or her people? She is awesome!

I can see how this could grow into a series. Definitely an enjoyable read.

Loved the story then and the authors other works. 4*

Don't remember where.... But i've read this before.... WAIT..... Maybe SOL if so then there's a bunch more.

For those of you who have read this before, I'm the same guy from SOL and FA, I'm in the process of uploading my body of work to Literotica, I have about twelve stories in the approval pipeline, and one more I'm almost done writing.

Boy you guys get around!

The flow of the story is excellent and very enjoyable . A very good love story that flowed well .

Not being a person of words it made it believable to me .

Great read hoping for more . 5*s

txcracker

Very good story. Love the alien, especially love that you devoted time and creative thought to her genitalia. Only complaint is the apostrophes. You were using a lot of apostrophes where you should've used periods.

I enjoyed this story very much, thanks for sharing it with us.

Realy enjoyed it, well writen. Not too long, not too short.

I liked this story a lot. The sex kind of felt a little forced though, I definitely prefer the progression of Fineprint (I know there's only so much you can progress in so much shorter of a story).

All in all, I hope you keep on writing. You are definitely a skilled storyteller, whom I'll look out for further stories from in the future.

Interesting plot, and good denouement! But I think O'Brian should re-think the name he wants to call his mate! Beanstalk!?

And ReGats, get your facts right! Apostrophes are different to commas.

Gave it ****. Sequel in the pipeline?

I love your stories, your already in my top 10 authors list for this site..but seriously man ye need to come up with other words than deformed when talkin about tits gettin squashed lol

Tazzy

You sent me an email but I can't reply or PM you if you're Anonymous!

I've finished uploading my existing body of work, so that's why it looks like I've slowed down. I'm always writing more though, I'm currently 50k words into a new story that you can check out early on my website (link in profile). I'll upload it here when it's all finished and edited.

Generally takes me about a month to write a novel length story and a couple of weeks for the shorter ones.

Amazing. The descriptive talent is awesome. Felt like my first time all over again!

I just read your Orc Female Story its awesome as hell!!!!. You have an awesome talent.

Thanks for the entertaining and humourous story.

Please tell me this takes place in that universe! I'd kill to see Beanstalk and her species show up in more narratives!

I love this story and would love to see more of Beanstalk and her species!

Sex with an alien is always hard to pull off well, even if it isn't very explicit. Doing it in pornographic detail requires great skill to make it both strange and arousing at the same time. Respect!

it launched.

One of it's delights is the seemingly neverending discovery of new writers, some of whom can truely be called authors.

You, sir,are,one of the few. You have a vivid imagination, shared in flowing prose.

Thank you for sharing your imagination and for the hard work it takes to put together a quality submission. If the rest of your work is up to the standard set by Crashland. you will find yourself one person closer to your hoped for 'percentage'.

Regards,

GeoD

This was a well written and well thought out story with all the right touches. Please continue Writing such stories, You are a master of literature and particularly Erotica.

Again, Very Well Done.

I really love your stories and read them all, but this one is probably my favorite. I always return to it and read it again. Is there a chance that you‘ll write a 2nd part to it?

Anyway, I really like how you set up your universe throughout your stories and will be happy to read Goethic Justice 2 when it‘s posted.

Snek,

Is this story going to be considered in the Pinwheel universe?

If not, is this a one off story in its own universe?

Thx,

MDG1969

Excellent writing!!

I'm glad I found your collection of stories, this is the second one I've had the pleasure to read. Although it seems that having sex with these alien women can be brutal, it's also very rewarding. Thanks

Excellent as always !

Excellent Story..!!

I love this story!

Do hope a sequals coming!

If she us a reptile then Ni belly button.....they lay eggs, only mammals have them. Just an observation, its on page 3.