All Comments on 'Last Orders'

a distinct difficulty with authority figures in this one. Although I think there have been a number of recent events that I wish this attitude had been taken. Some nice tongue-in-cheek phrasing here.

jim : )

An original take on the title challenge. Unloading that rant that many hold in when confrunted with the self-important order barkers. Good pacing there. :)

At last a smile to go with the tears wrought by today's poems. A bitter, sarcastic smile, but quite satisfying in it's way. ;)

Strong and fast paced, like many of your best. I really love this side of your poetry.