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by jthserra05/08/04

Oh my...

a distinct difficulty with authority figures in this one. Although I think there have been a number of recent events that I wish this attitude had been taken. Some nice tongue-in-cheek phrasing here.


jim : )

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by Liar05/08/04

Hehe

An original take on the title challenge. Unloading that rant that many hold in when confrunted with the self-important order barkers. Good pacing there. :)

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by minsue05/09/04

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At last a smile to go with the tears wrought by today's poems. A bitter, sarcastic smile, but quite satisfying in it's way. ;)

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by Lauren Hynde05/09/04

Going for the jugular...

Strong and fast paced, like many of your best. I really love this side of your poetry.

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