All Comments on 'Cousin Laura Ch. 01'

damn that is a really good story cant wait to read further chapters keep up the good work :D

I want the second part

Good story, but for the love of God: PROOFREAD YOUR WORK!!!

"I how you one!" what the heck? how do you even get "how" from "owe"?

The best stories can easily be destroyed by bad grammer, causing the reader to stop and try and figure out what the F**K you're trying to say.

your wording sucks big time why the hell didn't you use an editor? you write like your from some third world country and didn't go to school at all.

I really enjoyed the content but you really need to work on grammar. I almost stopped reading because of it.

Still waiting for part 2