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Amanda's Awakening Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/13/16

Love it

Great story. Whrn does she get together with Jolene?

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by Anonymous09/13/16

Great until it wasn't

This was a really erotic story (and I loved the fantasy aspect!) until the 5th last paragraph. You worked your audience up to the main course, but served it hurriedly.

Can you edit the story to be more descriptive of the actual group sex part?

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