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by Anonymous

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by tarablackwood2205/08/04

A very pleasant read.

Some wonderful lines and phrasing. Thank you.

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by Tathagata05/08/04

Life never goes

the way we plan.
but you've turned your pain into a wonderful poem.
some great word choices and phrasing
remember..this too shall pass
Thank you
Be Well

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by YDD05/09/04

Singing my life. . .

An inspiration complains about success,
and yearns for success to:
". . . negate all of your denials
with just one letter, just one note
that isn't made for everyone else"

I wish the poem ended before the last two stanzas.
An interesting theme.

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by quietpoly05/09/04

amazing poem

You said it so well.

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