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by Anonymous09/12/16

Fairly good

great plot, build up, and smooth transition from not wanting to have sex to an orgasm. love your writing style.

one thing to consider is that formal conversations, especially not using contractions, makes it a bit awkward and clumsy.

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by GeorgeH6109/13/16

Nice twist

Well written and a nice twist on the usual 'fucking the babysitter' stories. Dialogue a bit clumsy in places, but that didn't spoil it for me and I'd love to read a sequel.

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