Having an editor or proofreader work on your story before it arrived here would have corrected such things as "into" when you meant "in to," "their" for "they're," "than" for "then," and more. It would have heightened my enjoyment of your story, too. I hope your next story is better.
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Having an editor or proofreader work on your story before it arrived here would have corrected such things as "into" when you meant "in to," "their" for "they're," "than" for "then," and more. It would have heightened my enjoyment of your story, too. I hope your next story is better.
Great start!
Loved your writing!
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