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Good sex in the story but...
Maybe I missed something but other than the guy having a curved dick and being able to give woman incredible pleasure, I don't understand why is he evil? Was he knocking up the women with his demon seed?I think your main female character has disapointed allot of women by killing off this stud. You should write a sequel where the guy with the curved dick returns from the beyond and secretly seduces her and impregnates the woman in the mental instittution where your story implys she is ends up. Oh and you should have included more illicit details about the sex with the man's and his other conquests. Have the female main character masturbate while she is watching the guy mate with the other women. That's my two cents.
Too funny!
"Stop, fiends! Dissemble no more! It is the throbbing of his hideous cock!"
Very funny. I got quite a grin from this. Kudos for something clever and different!
wonderful!
i have to agree, this was a wonderful read. the premise behind the story was not lost on me, thank goodness. and to the 'vampyre' reader, maybe you should read something besides erotica. ever heard of EDGAR a. poe? if you had gone to school, i'm sure you would have. great job to jthserra, though. i have to say it, it made me smile as well. keep going!
Great modern homage to Poe!
Should have called it The Telltale Throbbing Cock! lol :D
5/5 stars!
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