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Not enough
One chapter per story, a little more would be very appreciated looking forward to see where this story is heading.
Nice
Pleasant story with nothing much really throttling it yet. There are rules but they're vague. Be careful not to break any of rules you do set though.
I could not rate this story
There wasn't anything in this story that grabbed my attention enough to bring me back for another chapter. I had not read the first chapter, but this one was not something that made me wish to go and locate it which I do indeed do with other stories.
It lacked pull.
Morning routine
Should have been added to chapter one, and not a stand alone. This has the potential for a wickedly fabulous story, but this one chapter is more like a paragraph, and without chapter one's intrigue of characters is nothing. Readers see an rich old lady with a Jag, not an ancient courtesan vampire seducing a hot were club owner.
This chapter didn't gain any readers and probably lost some.
*****
I'm glad I waited and started reading when you have lots of chapters posted, so short and uneventful ones like this doesn't annoy me... I appreciate the background of both characters.
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