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by Anonymous

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by YDD05/09/04

Now. . . and Forever

The writer takes us through life in stanzas
a decade at a time.
The repetitions and alternations between stanzas is off-putting at first read.

However,
if you step back and take a look at what the poet is building
you may begin to be impressed by his attempt at structure.
Whether you like the work or not,
you should appreciate the effort put into the concept.

My favorite phrase is:
"Time has taken what time is owed"

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by Merrymaker05/10/04

Pulls you along

"we learn each other?s face" is my favorite phrase(have to remember that one)...nicely done.
~Merry

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