Mummy Time Ch. 04

Can't stop now!

Not only did you change the category to the perfect one but also jammed in so much good stuff it almost made me cry from happiness. But you can't stope here, there is lots of people to meet and know about the wedding like his parents and work colleagues, and the wedding itself, s much awesome potential left to explore!

5* as usual and really hope for lots more!

Again how old is Evie? Old enough for her to know about a 'maybe' pregnancy and to talk about baby names with mummy and remember, understand mummy time involves men, yet she sucks her thumb in chapter one? Maturity level of Evie you describe doesn't match her behaviour. Please answer on age of Evie, I reread all chapters and no age is mentioned. Story is rushed, we come in on chapter one where it feels its the middle of the story, not the start. Too much jammed in short chapters.

Thanks ;)

Thanks for the feedback! Sorry the structure is not to everybody's taste; this story is based on a real-life situation, I started it at the point I was interested in. The back-story is more or less what you'd assume from reading the start (worth knowing that 'Tim' is quite a bit older than 'Laura', but I didn't want to make this a 'Mature' story).

'Evie' is maybe six - I don't have kids, so any mistakes about their typical behaviour and knowledge at that age are entirely mine (but are there really no six year olds who might occasionally still suck their thumb? ;);).

Anyway, enjoy if you like it - plenty of other tales in the sea if not...