Okay, this is an extremely well written BDSM short, but it isn't about lesbian love, it's total BDSM & should've been posted in the appropriate category.
Here's my problem with this story. It's not clear if this is consentual bdsm or if the domme is fucking bat shit crazy. Also, there's nothing here about safety or any real clues that genuine affection exist between the two women. It was kinda bizarre & I was leftvwondering what was the point & why should i even care?
The descriptive sentences are good and varied nicely. However, I'm with CliterateDyke. This story reads like full-on BDSM--not that there's anything wrong with that, but maybe it should go under fetish?
I'm not a fan of "clobber words" like cunt. As a lesbian, I find it disrespectful and a turn-off. But I don't speak for everybody. I understand that some people do use it.
Keep writing. I'd like to see some more material from this author.
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Okay, this is an extremely well written BDSM short, but it isn't about lesbian love, it's total BDSM & should've been posted in the appropriate category.
Here's my problem with this story. It's not clear if this is consentual bdsm or if the domme is fucking bat shit crazy. Also, there's nothing here about safety or any real clues that genuine affection exist between the two women. It was kinda bizarre & I was leftvwondering what was the point & why should i even care?
Writing was good
The descriptive sentences are good and varied nicely. However, I'm with CliterateDyke. This story reads like full-on BDSM--not that there's anything wrong with that, but maybe it should go under fetish?
I'm not a fan of "clobber words" like cunt. As a lesbian, I find it disrespectful and a turn-off. But I don't speak for everybody. I understand that some people do use it.
Keep writing. I'd like to see some more material from this author.
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