All Comments on 'Jenn and the Old Man'

by Younglover1124

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Ick.

Where did all these illiterate, grammatically challenged so called WRITERS emerge from in the last Couple weeks? Editors--are there none out there?

gordo12gordo12over 7 years ago
Continue what?

A story that reads like it was written by a 13 year old looking to whack off!

I won't bother getting into the mispells and other problems.

You need grammar lessons and a lot more practise. 1*

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Very good

Very good story keep writing love to hear what went through wife's mind afterwards

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Careful when you critique

If you're going to criticize someone on spelling, you should probably learn that yourself. It's misspell.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
pretty

Shallow

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good stuff

I liked it. Write more!

CockholeCockholeover 7 years ago
More Resistance

You write well. I enjoyed the piece for the most part. My opinion: I wanted to read more resistance on the wife's part and more of a gradual reduction in her resolve to stay away from the repulsive old man with a big cock. She gave in far too quickly, and this was a missed opportunity for extending the sexual intrigue for a better pay off in the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great

More of this dirty old stud fucking senseless !

galisongalisonover 7 years ago
Hawt

So glad you kept writing, Jenn was great but this is icing.

DesertPunkDesertPunkalmost 7 years ago
Part 2?

I like it. :) I just hope it doesn't turn out like a cuck story... Also a bit more detail in the sex part. Wouldn't hurt. :)

Darkwarrior1Darkwarrior1about 5 years ago
So good

Need a follow up to this. So good

brady20brady20about 3 years ago

Very hot story hope chapter2 can't wait to see if Phil got all his cock inside Jill

I'm sure Jenn wanted more of his cock love to see if Phil puts it in her tight ass

Love to read about Jenn take a old blk man cock

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I, too, have had hot experiences with older men. I can get them hard and make them moan with pleasure. They love to look at and touch my creamy white skin and feel me up. I constantly arouse a 72 year old man I know. I have given him many orgasms. A lot of older guys like women in stockings, etc., so I flash a lot of nylon-covered thigh, and it gets them everytime.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Yes it's true a big different between huge cock and small cock, with my husband cock 5 inches fully erect,first l think it's ok but l know that some guys have blessed with a big cock,and my saliva drip my mouth, seeing in a video of porn make my pussy wet.

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