I knew that I had come to love this series when I got to the end and felt the hole that is left when you come to the end of something you have loved. I have been addicted to the story of Ed Walters, and I am genuinely sad that there will not be any more stories about him. I have become a big fan of your writing style and I deeply enjoy the stories you have written. Please consider extending Ed's story, or starting a new one similar to it. Thank you for taking the time to write this beautiful story as it has been a great read from beginning to end.
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Anonymous01/25/17
Phenomenal
Bro, you are awesome. Thank you so much for writing this story. Sex aside, I am genuinely happy this art exists in the world. It was a phenomenal read.
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Anonymous01/26/17
Amazing
You have wonderfully blended so many human emotions into one beautiful story. You drew me in early and had me feeling for all of these characters. Very good job and thank you.
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Anonymous01/27/17
Just awesome
Please write more stories as this is a great piece of work.
All your work is terrific and a great escape from every day pressures.
I have to say for being such a long read you did fantastic. The sex was well written, I personally appreciated not having to much kink or any thing that would really make the story seem greatly outlandish. Grammatically there were minimal errors if any. I might have noticed a character mix up or 2 but for all 3 series being upwards of 90 pages, holy crap you were on point. My favorite characters were Zoe and Stephanie. I would have loved their stories to have been a little more to the front. Congrats on a job very well done. I must say at this point I can't wait to peruse your other works.
Voted 5 stars not a single point deducted because these 3 pieces were well written and, for me, I could see there was a lot of time and creativity invested here.
So when Carolyn gave her acceptance speech, why wasn't it mentioned that Ed discovered how to discipher the tattoo?
Not that it matters, great reading.
Everything in this series is top-notch, excellently written, good thing is that its not straight forward like other stories (totally driven by Lust) and too much LOVED by me...even if it contained 200 pages I would read it (3 times!!)...
Looking forward *eagerly* for next chapters....
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Incredible
I knew that I had come to love this series when I got to the end and felt the hole that is left when you come to the end of something you have loved. I have been addicted to the story of Ed Walters, and I am genuinely sad that there will not be any more stories about him. I have become a big fan of your writing style and I deeply enjoy the stories you have written. Please consider extending Ed's story, or starting a new one similar to it. Thank you for taking the time to write this beautiful story as it has been a great read from beginning to end.
Phenomenal
Bro, you are awesome. Thank you so much for writing this story. Sex aside, I am genuinely happy this art exists in the world. It was a phenomenal read.
Amazing
You have wonderfully blended so many human emotions into one beautiful story. You drew me in early and had me feeling for all of these characters. Very good job and thank you.
Just awesome
Please write more stories as this is a great piece of work.
All your work is terrific and a great escape from every day pressures.
Thanks so much for your efforts.
Just finished this read again!
They don't get any better than the stories you pen!!! So many THANKS!
Great series
I have to say for being such a long read you did fantastic. The sex was well written, I personally appreciated not having to much kink or any thing that would really make the story seem greatly outlandish. Grammatically there were minimal errors if any. I might have noticed a character mix up or 2 but for all 3 series being upwards of 90 pages, holy crap you were on point. My favorite characters were Zoe and Stephanie. I would have loved their stories to have been a little more to the front. Congrats on a job very well done. I must say at this point I can't wait to peruse your other works.
Voted 5 stars not a single point deducted because these 3 pieces were well written and, for me, I could see there was a lot of time and creativity invested here.
Great read
Plenty of twists to the story keep up the good work
so good
Usually more than two or three pages and I lose intetest, but I've read and loved all three of these!
Excellent series!
So when Carolyn gave her acceptance speech, why wasn't it mentioned that Ed discovered how to discipher the tattoo?
Not that it matters, great reading.
The best of all time.. (seriously)
Everything in this series is top-notch, excellently written, good thing is that its not straight forward like other stories (totally driven by Lust) and too much LOVED by me...even if it contained 200 pages I would read it (3 times!!)...
Looking forward *eagerly* for next chapters....
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