To Walk a Mile

Perfect!!!!

I love your stories933f

lovely story

a lovely story, it feels like the end of this one though thats sad i love its characters

Wow!

In my opinion, this story has not only ended up being the best one you've submitted so far, but also one of the best stories I've seen posted on Lit. I hope to see more from you in the near future!

finally

glad to see this fine story end on a great note. you tied up all the story lines vey well.

Amazing Series, Amazing Ending!

Thanl you so much for this amazing series. I wish I could share it such a great and well developed story and it came to an amazing ending. thank you again!

what a great way to end the story well done

Well Done

Thank you!

One of the best stories on Literotica!
I must say that I'm a bit sad though. I will miss these characters and I sincerely hope that you, sometime in the future, will come back to them and tell us more about their lives.

Bravo

Bis!

Bravo!

Fucking Awesome!

You really "set the bar" with this one!

You weave such wonderful passionate incredible stories that are all but impossible to stop reading once started. I look every day to see what you might come up with next. Thanks!

Wonderful

Your plots are really good. I know the stories are not very realistic, but that is the point of fiction, to suspend the mundane enough that we are taken away to new worlds.

Thanks for the great story.

I thoroughly enjoyed the ending of Ed and his family's story. I hope you're able to return to these characters some time in the future. Those three days in New Orleans with grace seems interesting. I would love to read something from the kids point of view on how they see their father. Thanks for introducing these characters to us, and look forward to your next work.

Another great read from you.I love the way you build your characters.Makes me almost believe I know them personally.Many thanks for your stories.Do please keep up the great work.Many thanks.

Best of the bsst

Just another example of why you're my Favorite Author among my Favorite Authors! Fantastic characterization combined with great story telling. Thanks for the great read!!

My only regret....

Love the series!

I just wished that Isabelle could have been properly conditioned physically to receive Ed so she could experience savage fuckings without injury. Her enthusiasm should have been rewarded with acceptance by the group.

Also wished for some medical miracle for Rachel so she too could bear Ed children.

The collective mothering by the group was beautiful. They each contributed their personal style, and in turn allowed his dominant side to customize his sexual expression to them individually.

Nice job.

Your Body of Work.........So Far!!

Your writing,characters and story plots are second to none. When I read about The Shepherd, I was nervous about each stories length. Then when I reached the end on page twenty something, I wished there were an additional 20 pages!

Please keep writing and sharing
Ed

Abso-fuckin-lutely Brilliant!

I love your stories. Looking forward to what you have in store for us. Keep up the good work. Many thanks from South Africa.

Take a bow!!

You are a brilliant story teller. I have become so emotionally invested in these characters. I'm lucky to have read these stories about Ed.

Just about fantastic

I want to preface this with: You are a fantastic author and I truly believe you understand how to tell a truly complex and fulfilling story.

That being said, I loved this series so much, but the ending felt lacking. Not that it was bad, it was really good. It's just that I loved the first two more so than just about anything on this site, and I have been awaiting this ending for months now. And then this was what I got, instead of an amazing ending it was more like a very nice one. I felt that the Shepherd series got a tad repetitive and that this one was cut short by its length. Like the entire story Victoria is simply already gone and all we got was one scene with her, and here I was waiting for them to be together since the One Who Understands. Her entire character was about being, nearly obsessively, attached to Ed and then she just up and says "Okay I'm all better now and have decided to stay in England" . Then there was the lack of love scenes with Grace, his (let's be honest) main love interest except a small scene at the end. SPOILER: Also her infertility seemed sad and a tad bit unnecessary. It was just slightly disappointing and worrisome for me with regards to Ben's story. I mean I may have loved Ed's story more, but I have grown to very much enjoy the Shepherd series and now its ending may be as lacking as this.

Still, I did enjoy this story and loved the series as a whole. You are a fantastic author and I definitely will try to read every story you have posted. Thank you for taking the time to read this and I am grateful for the time you have devoted to these.

Wonderful!

I only sort of liked the previous two Ed stories. They were good, but I preferred the Shepard series. This instalment was different. All the character development was fantastic and brought the story to a different level. It has been an incredible read!

The story I didn't know I Wanted!

I was hoping your next story would be another Shepard story, or maybe another tale about Jack. I never expected a third story about Ed as I thought that tale was finished. But I am delighted! This was a great chapter. And if it's the end, it's a fitting send off. Well done. 5 stars!

Great Post

Favourite scene had to be Ed ripping Luis apart and then Zoe right after ;)
Grace and Ed has such a great bond wish I got to see more of them tbh
Best story I've read from this site so far

Thanks for posting

Outstanding story

Thank you for a wonderful story. Just amazing.

Loved it

To be honest I came to Literotica one day looking for a quick play. After a few pages he thought never crossed my mind while reading the story. From the first paragraph of the first story of Ed and his Ladies, to the very last, I've laughed, cried, cheered, been afraid and even felt angry a few times. No tale since the Lord of the Rings series has made me feel so much and feel so connected to the characters.

You have a true gift and I sincerely hope that you can find it inside you to give us more Ed.

I've bookmarked the installments and your author page hoping one day I'll get to spend more time with Ed and his family.

hmmmmmmm

This talented author writes a story that takes you on a mental ride and then opens your heart and blends you into the feelings and happening of what he is telling you about. He isn't sloppy about erotica, he isn't brash about situations in the story. You feel it, and in a sense you live it. Ed was like most of us in his early years. He was subconcious about something we al were, or most of us, about being one of the "boys". Every one was to fit in and be equal to others. But he had a "bas" incident, which if your memory will be honest, we all had in one form or another. He was able through love, and others that cared, to be "wholed". My hat is off many times to you sir. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. And your very inspirational stories and ideas. Now, readers, think back.....could you have been able to live up to the deep, deep dream of having a harem that your wildest dreams want you to have.
hmmmmmm...... GP

Superb story

This is the best story I have ever read. Man u r a genius. Can u continue this story it's way too good

A very wonderful story.

Ive read al three and I am lost for words. There are moments of laughter and moments that i found myself in tears. This story inspired me to be a better man and be forgiving. Your Ed is a good example of being a human being compasionate and loving, generous and a great lover. Ed was a very special person and so as the writer who created him in the minds of us readers. Thank you very much for the tale I really loved it. Im married and have a daughter, I wish to be like Ed without the harrem. Im not against the idea of having multiple loved ones intimately. But I am satisfied and greatful that I have a wonderful wife. Sory for saying more than nessessary. Thank you again.

Hey man I have hated reading for the longest time but after reading this I am in love with reading again man I feel so many emotions during this ride I want to say thank you

Genious

The "Ed" series is amazing. I hope it isn't over yet and wish you can find some time to give us some more. The sex is amazing but what really gets to me is the storyline. You are a gifted writer.

Great Story Teller

The author has a keen sense of human nature.

Impressed with Ed's speech at Carolyn's presentation. Ed understood Carolyn and her work well.

The love, respect, dignity and acceptance in the group is a model for us all.

Thanks!

Absolutely Fabulous! Thanks for taking the time to write it all and give it to us!

Is this the end?

Seems like a wrap up at the end, and if so, well done.

All Burnt's other story lines will keep us sated.

This was a 5 star story from beginning to end, thank you.

Perfect!

I could not think of the words that would describe this peice of art. All I can say is that you really are an inspiration. Thanks.

great writing!

I read anything with your name on it!

I've been ruined.

This series has ruined me for any other story on literotica. I can't describe how much I love this series and I hope that this isn't the last one. Keep making great content.

The best I've read

You stayed true to your theme throughout this trilogy unlike some previous slips with Ben & his entourage.

Very entertaining & I encourage you to continue in the same vein.

Just don't over complicate it. You've already got it right.

Need more Ed.

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What else can you really say?

GREAT!

Great sequel...admire your writing

Absolutely Great

Loved this series from the beginning. I kept hoping for another one after "One who understands" then again after"the most valuable gift" and now while I feel this story just concluded the series I keep hoping for another. Great work.

FANFUCKINGTASTIC

This trilogy was excellent, very believable with GREAT EDITING!!! Good effort.😉😉😉. Five stars!!!

Please another one

OMG!!please can we have a
nother one where the kids are grown up please!!!

what a moving character

Everything's already been said. The ending of the mona Lisa scene was truly applause worthy.

This trilogy is actually the best series I've ever read. I like to think of them as one whole book all together and each one is just a section or a chapter. I'm not exaggerating when I say it's the best thing I've ever read tied with "Lady in Red". Thats only because this story has more sex scences which are more descriptive, and the lady in Red series has more action scenes. But one thing I have to say is, when Ed and Zoe were in the bar and he ripped the dudes arms off I was literally shaking 38th excitement, I could've been mistaken for someone with a severe case of Parkinson's, no joke. But if you do write another one like this or even add on to it, throw in some more action scenes. Even if you don't its still a 5 star, easily. Thank you so much for this amazing read. I finished all three parts in 3 days btw. The second part was my favorite because of the bar scene.

Phenomenal

Simply phenomenal. Literally nothing else can be said.

Brilliant

Just absolutely Fabulous, Well Done, a stunning story well crafted with the right amount of pathos and emotion.

Just wow!

Nothing else to say but thank you!

Amazing Set of stories.

So Very well Written. I could not ask for more. Thank You for a Truly heart felt story of Love and compassion.
I laughed, I cried, I choked up, It was wonderful.

Very good, well done, thank you

However,
I wish Ed had been a bit more self aware. He is described as a simpleton not capable of coping in society. Borderline autistic.
As much as I enjoyed the sexual coupling, repeating the same procedure again and again became repetitive. It was all to easy to skip the erotic passages in order to cut to the intrigue.
29 pages? I wish the natural division points had been used as storyline breaks. ie.
Kansas,
Paris and the Louvre,
returning to the girlfriends
5 years later.

but who am I to make suggestion to writers? I am just a reader.

More ,

Such a great read the full set of stories , captivating , horny and good escapism with feeling . Well done .