My Number Ch. 04

Don't let it go there

I have loved that this is a simple love story. I can see where this might be going, and I really hope it's not going there. There are relationships that simply work without extra drama being introduced. Stories like these are very rare and refreshing.

Hope that it works out for Amanda & Eric

Love the natural progress the two MCs have, even the corny bear jokes and the messy morning only added to their fire for each other. On the other hand Amanda & Eric are in the early stages yet the signs are there if both of them wont it to work. I expect that the shower scene only reignites Marcy's lust for Dave and reminds her of her past ways and how far she'd come in those 6 days.

As usual 5*!

Keep 'em comin'...

...just don't let Marcy or her past screw up their relationship, please...

~MD

Great so far!

This relationship of Marcy's and Dave seem to fit best with monogamy. Marcy will have a hard time going from 54 to 1. That is some mighty hard breaking. If we don't get through the shower thing here alive. I am going to be very disappointed.

I really like the story so far, straight forward, honest and real. Keep it going in the same direction and it will be a winner.

I like this series, a lot.

I find it very refreshing;
the jaded "bad girl" falling
for the earnest good guy
point of view is well done.
I hope we'll read more of
Dave and Marcy's romance.

The best.....

Too beautiful....idk what to say

Nice!

I'm really enjoying this series, I keep forgetting this isn't Loving Wives, and wait for the other shoe to drop!

No. 4 still on track

so far, this series is staying on track as a great romance story. it's a welcome change from some of the usual story lines, and definitely grabs your attention when you first start it. i just hope it doesn't go off the rails. many thanks for some great entertainment.

Nice Job

A good chapter. Macy is learning what true love can be with Dave, and so advises Amanda to Eric. Well done!
I hope the shower scene does not represent a return of Macy to her past, as other readers have commented (the next chapter is already published, so we'll see).
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

I don't understand how she was so flippant about bleeding all over brand-new sheets. The faster you start soaking them and rinsing out the blood, the better. It makes her seem pretty thoughtless.