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by Anonymous

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by Bodhi197809/20/16

Awesome setup!

You have got to continue this story! I love the flow of both stories; keep it going!

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by TheOldRomantic09/21/16

Good story

Good story.
Maybe you need the help of an orthographic corrector or one editor to solve the grammatical errors, but the story looks well.
Good Job.

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by Anonymous09/22/16

What about mom?

Very well done. I think mom wants in on this!

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by Mr Wild willy10/20/16

GOOD START.....but not complete!

This is a very good start as far as the plot goes. The writing, punctuation,grammar needs a little more polish. All the technical stuff would be assisted by a good editor. As to the plot. The brother and sis need to go all the way and THEN Mom wants in on it. IMHO

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