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I Felt Almost Right

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by greenmountaineer09/14/16

My imagination can connect the dots, real or not, among the sentences in this work, KC, maybe because of the first sentence; alot of nuance and contrast.

"We sleep head to head on different beds" and "I miss you" made me think of twin beds in the same room where once there may have been a queen.

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by KikahCornelius09/18/16

Thanks

for your feedback. I like those thoughts.

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