Pogo's Very Long Day

Non-Human ?

This is probably THE most human of all of the Shameless spinoffs.
I don't know who makes these calls on which category a story goes in , but Non-Human , this story isn't.
Loved it Todd172 , I hope others will find it here.
Have you found a Graphic Artist yet ??? $$$$$ !!!!
5 *'s of course !

P.S. for those who read this category exclusively , do your selves a favor and read this authors entire catalog , trust me.

Excellent!

'Nuff sed.

Not a non human story

Monster is human, a damaged human to be sure, but even damaged as he is he is still human. That he knows he is damaged but still trusts himself around his wife and kids, and grandkids, means he has faith in his ability to function even with the damage. So while he may be called monster by some ii would consider him more as a highly trained operative who simply no longer feels constrained by anything other than operational rules.

Submitted as LW category

All,
This story has ended up in the wrong category. Per the introduction, this
is a continuation of the SHAMELESS/MONSTER series in LW, and should be
there. Not sure, but my overly poetic tag line "Love's Strange Forms and
the Perils of Hunting Monsters" may have something to do with it. I've
reported it in hopes of getting it corrected, but not sure if or when that
will happen. The character Monster is a Special Missions Unit operator with
brain trauma, not a non-Human.
Thanks,
Todd172

Great story!

Thanks for sharing.

a dark tragedy, yes

non-human, no
crkcppr said it best. This story is the most Human in the series, so far.
this placement may be the victim of a bot scanning Tags?
thanks again

Submitted Edit to Catagories

All,
I've used Report and have now submitted the category change as an Edit, so it should move, but may take 48 to 72 hours depending on how busy they are.
Thanks for your patience.
Todd172

Get off this site

Seriously you are too damn good to be wasting your time here. Your stories remind me of the Cross series by Vachss or the better Mack Bolan books by Pendleton. 5 stars not enough

Favorite new author/series

This series crept up on me. But I like it. A LOT.

I'm not kidding. Best new author on LIT. Thanks.

5 stars.

Another great tale from The Shack.

Crkcppr and rightbank said it all. You are a master at this style of writing and I wait impatiently for your next story.

I like how you have woven angel/shameless back into the tale while starting to give us a glimpse of who Howard is. You just keep making me want more and that's a good thing.

Thanks to sbrooks103x for doing an excellent job of editing.

Thank you for writing, looking forward to your next tale, and 5 stars again.

not one of your stories belongs in LW. they don't even belong in a porn site. what the fuck are you doing here?

Great Stories

Go commercial and I will buy them.

Eh?

Why is this in non-human? I was expecting/dreading that Spooky would die and come back as a ghost or something. Grrr.

Fantastic story as always. Just loving the Shack family as a whole.

Thanks

I'm really enjoying this series. Please continue them.

Great Fuckin' Stuff!

I love your writing Todd! The stuff that comes outta your mind if very entertaining.

For instance:
"My survival is a testimony to the global problem of really bad marksmanship. Given how pervasive that problem is, they should probably start a charity.

I can already picture Sally Struthers saying, "This is Pogo, and despite the thousands of rounds fired at him, he's still alive. With your help..."

Operators are standing by....

The other kind of operators of course."

You owe me a keyboard. Do you have any idea how hard it is to get a KB to work properly when its been flooded with coffee? Especially when that coffee has been mixed with snot!

Keep 'em coming!

@Sharito

Yeah, I didn't react QUITE that strongly (good thing, because I'm on laptop!), but that was a great passage!

I really liked...

How you wove the two story threads together here. Well done!
thankyou

I think Donna's little "joke" may have gotten this tagged as non-human. For fuck's sake!

Great story, though. I absolutely love these. Thank you for sharing them with us.

Cog

No doubt another excellent story of this saga...

No doubt another excellent story of this saga...I don't know, but maybe this was the best of them...The reading flowing and making the readers don't stop for nothing...Not even to go pee...Just a question: Who put this in "Non Human"? "Non Human" are the people that ordered the bombing of the Red Cross convoy that took food and medicine to Aleppo...Not people who take care of their families...4*

Awesome!!

Fellow anonymous, go fuck yourself!!

He's right where he wants to be and that's fine with the rest of us.

As far as I can tell the people who run lit & sort stories don't give a fuck about readers or authors. I'm not sure if they're assholes, morons or just completely indifferent to the needs & wants of the community. I doubt the difference matters anyway. The result is the same. A story horribly mis-categorized and missed by many of the authors readers.

Awesome instalment. Look forward to more. Thx.

I wrote before that I would buy your novel. That still holds true (I did that with DQS). If you ever decide to publish, or post somewhere else, please let us know.
Thanks for sharing

COVERT OPS ARE EXTREMELY DANGEROUS

secret and well hidden all the way. TK U MLJ LV NV

I want more

Good writing. This would make a great TV Series.

These stories have to be based on real people

These stories have to be based on real people. This is just too real not to be.

Wow you are good

I would love to know the basis of your stories, where you get your knowledge from, was it time in service, or just curiousity and lots of reading?

SECRET RITUALS SHOULD REMAIN SO

even amongst allies and friends; TK U MLJ LV NV