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by Anonymous09/17/16

Interesting

A little bit THX1138. Would like to see more, but ending it here can certainly generate a lot of reader speculation. I think there will be more value in continuing, letting the reader know the pieces that make up this world.

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by Anonymous09/17/16

How soon does he reagain his memery and take his revenge, it would make the next chapter worth reading.

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by Anonymous09/28/16

a collection of words

(As title) stuck togeterr and not making any sence, there is no story there at all.

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