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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/20/16

One Day Layover

Sure, it's more cuck shit, nothing wrong with that kind of story.
this doesn't reach the point of being a story. Two minutes with a dildoe, and whoop-the-fuck-doo.
He gave you 1*?
Overly generous.
Wish I could give you a -2, but I'm loath to insult preschoolers.

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by Anonymous10/21/16

Finish

Finish the damn story before you publish it. I hate half finished stories!

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by Anonymous12/12/16

Why do this?

Not one of your stories is completed. You seem to have the start of some be y good stories, but simply let them die off. Finish the stories before you start another one.

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