I really like this series. Suprise sex is some of the best memories and stories like this bring those memories out for review. Keep up the great writing. Thanks
This was a well written and very sexy tale -your description of the girl was fantastic! The one thing that distracted from it for me was the guy going on about the gym...and being toned...it didn't seem to flow with the bulk of the story :) All in all a very erotic piece though!
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Anonymous12/20/04
I like it, I like it.
None of my mall trips end up quite like your's, but, keep up the good work. You have a great writing style.
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Anonymous12/12/05
Wow
I've been looking for a good goth chick story. Red-head goth chick, very nice and a great story at that.
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Anonymous08/16/09
Top-notch
All of the "Everyday Screw" stories are top-notch erotica -- good job! This one might be my favorite, but it's a tough call.
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Anonymous09/28/09
That was HOT!
Nice and sexy, honey! I want you to fuck me in the ass like that! Thanks for a nice little quickie to read before bedtime. Can't wait to read more!
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Anonymous05/10/12
wow...very hot
I'll never look at photo booths the same way again.
English
Really Good
I really like this series. Suprise sex is some of the best memories and stories like this bring those memories out for review. Keep up the great writing. Thanks
Great Visuals!
Very good attention to detail
Surprise Sex
Ah yes, surprise sex is one of my favorite story topics too. Good story. I'm going back to read more of your stories.
nothing like this series....
well conceived and very erotic! Bravo!
Wow!
This was a well written and very sexy tale -your description of the girl was fantastic! The one thing that distracted from it for me was the guy going on about the gym...and being toned...it didn't seem to flow with the bulk of the story :) All in all a very erotic piece though!
I like it, I like it.
None of my mall trips end up quite like your's, but, keep up the good work. You have a great writing style.
Wow
I've been looking for a good goth chick story. Red-head goth chick, very nice and a great story at that.
Top-notch
All of the "Everyday Screw" stories are top-notch erotica -- good job! This one might be my favorite, but it's a tough call.
That was HOT!
Nice and sexy, honey! I want you to fuck me in the ass like that! Thanks for a nice little quickie to read before bedtime. Can't wait to read more!
wow...very hot
I'll never look at photo booths the same way again.
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